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Started by Snowy, September 30, 2011, 06:45:03 AM

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snoorkel

September 30, 2011, 02:11:21 PM #15
"In The Crucible lies and deceit are a major part of the story because in the court case, Proctor was confessing to his lies, but then his wife covered up for him in an attempt to save his name (reputation). " :'(

Hippopo

September 30, 2011, 02:43:10 PM #16
lol

Guys, it wasn't that bad for high school.  I'd say it's about a sophomore/early junior level paper.

Andria

September 30, 2011, 03:04:34 PM #17
Quote from: Hippopo on September 30, 2011, 02:43:10 PM
lol

Guys, it wasn't that bad for high school.  I'd say it's about a sophomore/early junior level paper.

What high school/level of classes were you in man?

If I turned that into an AP level class I would be like laughed out. We were pumping out essays better than that within 90 minutes. akudood;

silvertone

September 30, 2011, 03:16:35 PM #18
Quote from: Mio on September 30, 2011, 03:04:34 PM
*judges 5th grade reports to 12th Grade AP english class*


wow cool post bro

snoorkel

September 30, 2011, 03:30:11 PM #19
Quote from: Hippopo on September 30, 2011, 02:43:10 PM
lol

Guys, it wasn't that bad for high school.  I'd say it's about a sophomore/early junior level paper.


lol it was pretty fucking terrible

Hippopo

September 30, 2011, 05:35:38 PM #20
Quote from: Mio on September 30, 2011, 03:04:34 PM
What high school/level of classes were you in man?

If I turned that into an AP level class I would be like laughed out. We were pumping out essays better than that within 90 minutes. akudood;
Oh god.  I didn't see it was for AP.

Yeah, this is in no way an AP level paper.  It is, however, pretty average for your standard Sophomore English course.  At least the students around here produce papers like that.

Andria

September 30, 2011, 05:40:15 PM #21
Quote from: Snowy the Majestic Møøse on September 30, 2011, 05:38:40 PM
I had to write it over the summer. akudood;

That's no excuse at all  akudood;

silvertone

September 30, 2011, 05:41:12 PM #22
Quote from: Snowy the Majestic Møøse on September 30, 2011, 05:38:40 PM
I had to write it over the summer. akudood;
you had 3 months to write that.... what

Mando Pandango

September 30, 2011, 05:51:51 PM #23
To be fair, The Crucible is pretty fucking awful. I think the essay reflects that pretty well.
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Hippopo

September 30, 2011, 05:52:34 PM #24
Quote from: Snowy the Majestic Møøse on September 30, 2011, 05:38:40 PM
I had to write it over the summer. akudood;
Snowy, why do you even reveal information like this? lol

That's pretty bad, dude.

Mando Pandango

September 30, 2011, 05:58:17 PM #25
Quote from: Snowy the Majestic Møøse on September 30, 2011, 05:57:21 PM
It's pretty good for an essay written in 2 days. thumbup;
Quote from: Snowy the Majestic Møøse on September 30, 2011, 05:42:49 PM
I did it in a day. wrench;


CHANGING OUR STORY ARE WE

I'M BEGINNING TO THINK YOU DIDN'T EVEN WRITE THIS
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Mando Pandango

September 30, 2011, 06:02:16 PM #26
You revised this?

Christ, snowy.
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Hippopo

September 30, 2011, 06:02:49 PM #27
Quote from: Snowy the Majestic Møøse on September 30, 2011, 05:57:21 PM
It's pretty good for an essay written in 2 days. thumbup;
Nah man

snoorkel

September 30, 2011, 06:06:30 PM #28
Quote from: Snowy the Majestic Møøse on September 30, 2011, 05:57:21 PM
It's pretty good for an essay written in 2 days. thumbup;


no it's pretty good for an essay written on your phone while walking to school late and completely fucking drunk 10 minutes before it's due, in no other situation would it suffice :'(

Andria

September 30, 2011, 06:09:08 PM #29
Quote from: Snowy the Majestic Møøse on September 30, 2011, 05:57:21 PM
It's pretty good for an essay written in 2 days. thumbup;

I think I already mentioned that we had to shit out essays in under 90 minutes that were a million times better than that consistently throughout my high school career. Then for the test you had to do one big and two short answer which are a couple pages worth of writing.

You have zero excuse for this  akudood;
Quote from: vziard on September 30, 2011, 06:06:30 PM
no it's pretty good for an essay written on your phone while walking to school late and completely fucking drunk 10 minutes before it's due, in no other situation would it suffice :'(

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