It was you, you did.

[The spy who loves you]

I drift further into isolation.
Digging my soul into a deeper depression.
The pressure keeps beating me down.
People don't view me or speak of me the same way when I'm not around.
All this questions on what the source of my sorrow is.
My answer, "it was you, you did".

One moment you're proclaiming your love for me.
The next you're cursing me and blaming me for all that is unholy.
You look at me, seeing the pain in my eyes.
Looking at me...asking me why I cry...what do I feel inside...why do I want to die...Who did this to me?
My answer, "it was you, you did".

You said you'd always be there for me, because you were a friend.
But what's the source of your loyalty, cash I spend?the help I'm willing to lend?
Because it seems like you play me off like you do to some prep bitches, am I really still a bro?
That's sure as hell not what your actions show.
You say it's me.
I say it's you.
Others says its all of us.
My answer.
It was you, you did.

put that together in a few minutes how is it

[Nyerp]

hey what the fuck that avatar belongs to me you little asshole

[The spy who loves you]

hey what the fuck that avatar belongs to me you little asshole

its from a smash comic shut up hoe

Anyways what did you think nyerp

[Ezloﺕ]

ban for stealing avatars

[Nyerp]

Anyways what did you think nyerp

it sucked ass

ban for stealing avatars

[Socks]

it sucked ass

You'd know all about that.

[Nyerp]

You'd know all about that.

im a virgin

[Socks]

im a virgin

Terrific. Unfortunately that has nothing to do with sucking ass.

[Samus Aran]

I hope you intended this as very loose free verse, because that's the only way to read it with any sort of impact. Also, you really don't need to end every line with a period like that, especially since it interrupts with the flow in a few spots.

Uh, it's not really my style, though. I prefer more condensed or rhythmic poetry myself rather than ramble-esque free verse (with some exceptions, of course). 

I also must say you're a bit of a brave soul for posting poetry of all things on Boyah. Most people here don't really know anything about writing poetry and many users seem to hate it. I keep my literature quite far way from this place.

[The spy who loves you]

I hope you intended this as very loose free verse, because that's the only way to read it with any sort of impact. Also, you really don't need to end every line with a period like that, especially since it interrupts with the flow in a few spots.

Uh, it's not really my style, though. I prefer more condensed or rhythmic poetry myself rather than ramble-esque free verse (with some exceptions, of course). 

I also must say you're a bit of a brave soul for posting poetry of all things on Boyah. Most people here don't really know anything about writing poetry and many users seem to hate it. I keep my literature quite far way from this place.

i dont really know how to write poetry thats why i didnt care about posting it

it was just a little rhyme a came up with while i was sitting in here

[Socks]

I keep my literature quite far way from this place.

You're the guy with the novels.

[Hiro]

i thought it was pretty decent
not amazing, but quite good

KAZ SHOW US SOMETHING OF YOURS

[Samus Aran]

You're the guy with the novels.

I mostly write poetry but I have been writing a novel, yes.

KAZ SHOW US SOMETHING OF YOURS

good lord no

[Hiro]

I mostly write poetry but I have been writing a novel, yes.

good lord no

why not?
Can I see some in private 

[Kalahari Inkantation]

not bad
I suck at poetry and would never post any of my writing on Boyah.