Did I use this ; right?

[NOA_Haunted]

 I feel sorry for the people who have toââ,¬Â¨Ã¢â,¬Â¨write the letters to the families of this young lost souls; and for the families.


That is a sentence from a paper I am writing. Did I use the semi colon right?

[guff]

No.

[Daddy]

Nope.

[Daddy]

You also didn't use the English language right.

[Snorkel]

No. A proper use would be like this

I like ice cream; however, cookies are nice too

[ME##]

No.

A semicolon is used to string two sentences together no? Or is that a colon. 

[Karel]

Only one space between "to" and "write".

"This" should be "these".

"Whom." Objective case.

[NOA_Haunted]

You also didn't use the English language right.

I haven't proofed readed it yet

[Daddy]

Only one space between "to" and "write".

"This" should be "these".

"Whom." Objective case.

"This young lost souls"

I haven't proofed readed it yet

lol

[NOA_Haunted]

Only one space between "to" and "write".

"This" should be "these".

"Whom." Objective case.

I wish I was a good writer. 

[Karel]

I haven't proofed readed it yet

Proofread.

[Commander Fuckass]

"This young lost souls"lol

i wish i could proofed readed my sentences

[NOA_Haunted]

Proofread.

I know I was being dumb on purpose that time. 

[Karel]

I know I was being dumb on purpose that time. 

lol

[Karel]

also since no one pointed it out yet, when i said "'Whom.' Objective case." that's actually just a reference to the twilight zone and not the right answer