My new story idea

[Selkie]

It follows a normal day of the journalist, Frederick, who works at a magazine headquarters for a magazine about bobsledding. One day his fellow employees decide to play a practical joke on him and play games with his digital watch, steal it, then return it, and hide it in places, and try to make him believe he's going crazy.

At the end, Frederic committs suicide and throws himself out the window of the 40'th floor of the building.

The End.

[Placebo Headwound]

OK, you had something somewhat interesting with the first suicide, but then it just got retarded.

[Selkie]

OK, you had something somewhat interesting with the first suicide, but then it just got retarded.

Overkill?

Maybe I will just end it at Frederic committing suicide.

Will that be better?

[ncba93ivyase]

So Fred kills himself, then throws his corpse out the window?

[Placebo Headwound]

Is this supposed to be a short story? y;

[Selkie]

So Fred kills himself, then throws his corpse out the window?

Yes, that's exactly what happens.

[Selkie]

Is this supposed to be a short story? y;

Yesh, pretty short