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General => The Arts => Topic started by: hotlikesauce. on April 15, 2009, 06:42:52 PM

Title: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: hotlikesauce. on April 15, 2009, 06:42:52 PM
alright alright

this is where i get serious
you bout to be delirious
when i drop some mad lines
you about to turn blind

cause someone thinks its ok to be a bitch
and everyone knows he needs a hitch
cause his girlfriend left him to be with french guys
dont know about you but thats very wise

now he's on a bitch roll
and what'd he do? he told
i aint into playin games so here it goes
im about to take you out while recordin in the studio
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i wasnt trying to play games,
i aint tryin to baww
but when i dropshot
youll be in show and awe

(I said)

i wasnt trying to play games
i aint tryin to baww
but when i dropshot
youll be in shock and awe
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yeah, we know you bought your 50
and thats all nifty
but you cried when we exposed you
guess we know the real you

now you thought you were smart
you thought you were wise
but why'd you give your house number
to internet guys?

now im in the rap game
and you thought you were hardcore
when i spawn trapped your sorry ass
you cried for more

you tried to rationalize
and get a call-to-fame
but you gotta realize
im better than you at halo... and the rap game

now im ending up my verse
and you're about to pout
and your new name is fire
cause i stomped you out
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i wasnt trying to play games,
i aint tryin to baww
but when i dropshot
youll be in show and awe

(I said)

i wasnt trying to play games
i aint tryin to baww
but when i dropshot
youll be in shock and awe
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one twenty is what you claim you can bench
pretty hard for a guy who cries when pinched

boy, you aint gonna touch me
i know this for a fact
cause when i got to toronto
you'll be too busy watching your back

now you thinkin you're cool
you thinking you're fun
whyd you send me a video
of you failing to reload a gun?

i can't describe
how much you bitch and moan
and now you trying to challenge me
BITCH ITS YOU THAT I OWN

i own you in halo,
i own you in gears,
i can own your exgirlfriend
of a couple years

i got mad rhymes
something that you lack,
when i go to toronto you aint touchin me
this i know for a fact.

When I own your ass,
I invert your Y-axis,
Yeah,Get the fuck out
of my face, Metaxas.




So, uh, this is basically a huge diss. His girlfriend left him to go to Paris, he bought his 50 in Halo, and he said he was gonna beat me up if I go to Toronto. Even if you don't understand it, tell me what you think of it as a rap.
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Andrew1911 on April 15, 2009, 07:18:40 PM
...
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: hotlikesauce. on April 15, 2009, 07:48:44 PM
I'll take that as "It's god tier."
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: strongbad on April 15, 2009, 08:03:36 PM
I can't tell if this is serious or not.
Either way it's retarded.
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Sam on April 15, 2009, 08:04:48 PM
I think it's too elaborately written to be a joke...


so just... why?
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Sam on April 15, 2009, 08:06:17 PM
I'm sorry kevin, it's just... no. bad. blech. Do not write raps ever again.

That goes for every boyager.
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Andrew1911 on April 15, 2009, 08:08:35 PM
i think this calls for a ban
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Wrench on April 15, 2009, 08:09:42 PM
Quote from: Sam on April 15, 2009, 08:06:17 PM
I'm sorry kevin, it's just... no. bad. blech. Do not write raps ever again.

That goes for every boyager.

I'm a gangster
I'm a straight up G
The gangster life is the life for me
Shooting people by day
Selling drugs by night
Being a gangster is hella tight
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Sam on April 15, 2009, 08:15:04 PM
Quote from: Kasey on April 15, 2009, 08:09:42 PM
I'm a gangster
I'm a straight up G
The gangster life is the life for me
Shooting people by day
Selling drugs by night
Being a gangster is hella tight

... don't make me come over there, mister.  baddood;
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: strongbad on April 15, 2009, 09:32:51 PM
Quote from: Kasey on April 15, 2009, 08:09:42 PM
I'm a gangster
I'm a straight up G
The gangster life is the life for me
Shooting people by day
Selling drugs by night
Being a gangster is hella tight

Whoa nostalgia trip to 6th grade
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Travis on April 15, 2009, 10:02:18 PM
do you have a record deal my man?
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: hotlikesauce. on April 16, 2009, 04:38:03 AM
Quote from: Trav on April 15, 2009, 10:02:18 PM
do you have a record deal my man?


I should.
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Placebo Headwound on April 16, 2009, 10:44:28 AM
Bitches ain't shit but hoes and tricks
Lick on these nuts and suck the dick
Just get the fuck out after you're done
and I hops in my ride to make a quick run
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Classic on April 16, 2009, 03:06:44 PM
How embarrassing.
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Daddy on April 16, 2009, 03:10:01 PM
Quotethis is where i get serious
you bout to be delirious

It went down hill from there.
akudood;
There is a gross lack of multies baddood;
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: russell on April 16, 2009, 04:54:41 PM
do you understand what rap is

it is not writing 100 phrases that start with "I" or "you" or "when" and making them end with rhyming words

this is an example of rap

Quote
I was a dark, dumb student
No hooky rookie day trippin' on visions of chickens that look like R. Crumb drew 'em
They grew 'em in a royal dirt of Suffolk county's flooring with the blood of an alcoholic clergyman in his forearms
Long Island was porn stars and puppies pushin' sniffles
Fit into the aforementioned or slipped through the pinholes
'Zook slipped through the pinholes
Crispy the godsender who thunk over a quarter plunk to local Mortal Kom vender
Both the formal squad censor
Look down
Either side across the marsh before it was "Awesome cars!"
My calling card Calvary cooking an '85 Dodge Ares
Gas for Huntington and back, barely
Equipped with Super-Soakers full of piss and an uncanny knack for constantly upsetting pigs by doing stupid shit
The kid ... his ring king dummies to King Kullen, where he hollered "Fuck the world" from a parking lot in the suburbs


to give but one.



Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: Kalahari Inkantation on April 16, 2009, 06:00:11 PM
this thread makes me cringe befuddlement
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: me003 on April 20, 2009, 03:27:04 AM
Quote from: wziard on April 16, 2009, 04:54:41 PM
do you understand what rap is

it is not writing 100 phrases that start with "I" or "you" or "when" and making them end with rhyming words

this is an example of rap


to give but one.




what is aesop for 50 alex      and i talked to aesop just yesterday lol at a in-store but it was really awkward when i had nothing else to say so i walked away.
Title: Re: A rap. Tell me what you think.
Post by: snorkel on April 21, 2009, 01:05:41 PM
Quote from: Methree on April 20, 2009, 03:27:04 AM
what is aesop for 50 alex     


what