so a good friend of mine made a film

[applesauce]

He's always made short little things, but this is his first big project since dropping out of film school after two weeks. I like it. I hope you guys do too. You should probably full-sceen and HD it, since it's 25 mins.

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=428ueV2YtAY[/youtube]

[snoorkel]

the acting is pretty awful, but overall it seems not bad for a student film... I've seen quite a few ultra-pretentious 'films' from people in LMU's film program, this definitely tops those.

and oh it's by shane

[applesauce]

the acting is pretty awful

I agree, particularly about the girl who plays Sarah, and the tallest guy, whose name I forget. I like Dan/J and Garrett.

The acting/dialogue made a lot more sense to me after I read that it was first written to be a play. I don't know why, but I associate that dialogue style more naturally with live-action plays.

[Hiro]

"an rip 3d"

sheesh, 25 minutes is quite a feat. Some friends and I made a film for our school's 73 Hour Film Festival last week, I'll try to put it online maybe. It's not that great but we made it in about 2 days. It's under 4 minutes long, but the editing took something like 10 hours. 

[Socks]

I would have liked a better script. It was pretty flat writing I like my worlds round. I should be compelled by the film. If I write a little something will you pass it on to your friend?

[Hiro]

Shot around 15:49 is fucked up... doesn't transition too nicely.

I would have liked a better script. It was pretty flat writing I like my worlds round. I should be compelled by the film. If I write a little something will you pass it on to your friend?

haha, oh socks...

[Hippopo]

Shot around 15:49 is fucked up... doesn't transition too nicely.
haha, oh socks...

lol

I would actually like to see what kind of playwright Socks is.

[Hiro]

Aside from the problems everyone else mentioned and a few silly shots, that was really well-made.

[The Hand That Fisted Everyone]

hey i will act in your friends movies

[applesauce]

I would have liked a better script. It was pretty flat writing I like my worlds round. I should be compelled by the film. If I write a little something will you pass it on to your friend?

Yes, I would.