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I just wrote a poem

Started by Selkie, April 21, 2008, 06:18:54 PM

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Selkie

it's called "The Box"  doodthing;

upon my wake I see a box
and when I rise I gaze
it's always there, aloft my wall
the only thing that stays
my life's been empty, hollow, frail
but this box holds a day
that I once had, as a young lad
that stays to still amaze
I always wish I could go there
that place with birds and trees
the place with that lady oh so fair
and houses, grass, and bees
but then the lady leaves the box
and I hear a knock at my door
she walks in, and I say miss
do you know what this box is for?
she stands there, dumb and speechless
and I ask miss, why are you blank?
She finally responds to me,
"That's a window, you dumb plank"



guff


Selkie


Socks

Quote from: Commodore Guff on April 21, 2008, 06:20:06 PM
doesn't even rhyme


Indeed, only a few people can get away with that, and he is not one of them.

j o e i n c

this thred sux
id rather rape  ducks
cuz killer tofu's a bad rhymer
and ugly like a wrinkly old timer

Socks

Quote from: Van De Kamp on April 21, 2008, 06:26:33 PM
this thred sux
id rather rape  ducks
cuz killer tofu's a bad rhymer
and ugly like a wrinkly old timer


Now this is greatness.

Selkie

Quote from: Van De Kamp on April 21, 2008, 06:26:33 PM
this thred sux
id rather rape  ducks
cuz killer tofu's a bad rhymer
and ugly like a wrinkly old timer


why did you have to show me up like that  myface;

j o e i n c

thanks socks
i agree, my poem was better than the box
because im witty like a fox
sort of

Socks

Indeed, you are very funny and witty my dear old of friend,
You write, draw and express greatness with a simple mans hand.
If anyone is foolish to challenge they simply do not understand,
That is takes genius and talent to not simply write, but comprehend.

j o e i n c

there is a word for all you wrote
let me think; not boat,
or coat,
or gloat,
or float,
or moat,
or bloat,
or note...
ahh yes, and you should quote;
It is Milk!

Daddy

a clucky poem
i make lots of clucky posts
you get really pissed

famy

millionaires
come drink of this water
bears, too

i read that poem in english and i liked it

j o e i n c

Quote from: JMV on April 21, 2008, 06:50:32 PM
a clucky poem
i make lots of clucky posts
you get really pissed
a clucky poem!
a ducky flucky stucky mucky poem!
a lucky pucky tucky rucky poem!
a sucky poem!

Socks

JMV's obsession and false comfort with Clucky is but a fools dream,
For in his heart of hearts he knows thing are not as they may seem.
His solution lies not in her but in experiencing the joys of manhood,
For when that happens our dear Jimmy V will finally abandon solitude.

Full Metal Ryder


desunomost, dapa eata hamlet caramalldansen

ooh ooh ooh-awoh

ooh ooh ooh-awoh

awah oh wa oh

Do I win?

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