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Title: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Selkie on February 16, 2008, 04:47:29 PM
I based it of a super-cool dream I had the other night.


A human civilization was created on the moon, Europa and encompassed by a spherical force field, which preserves an Earth-like atmosphere inside, to make the civilians feel more at-home. One day the miners while digging deep for iron and natural resources break too deep into an underground city of extremely sophisticated beings and they begin to wreak havoc on the human city, in which the humans have no hope of escape.

If you like it I will write it as you guys the main characters  :3



Characters(tentative):

Me:
Soldier who tried to prosper in the iron industry but failed and joined the army
Trini: Guy who betrays humans then who gets brutally killed
Title: protagonist of some sort idk who exactly yet
YPR: Guy who refuses to wear red shirts
Culoo: Crossdressing boyfriend of me
Kono: one of the unknown extremely sophisticated beings, the right hand man to the leaser and will make first contact with the human miners. personality is serious, yet constantly makes subtle little jokes or puns about the human race and it's shaky history. killed in some sort of a battle protecting the leader of the Europish race.
Bassir: Geek who dies
Zidone: King of the castle in the sky
XYZ: the best friend of the protagonist. Dies a slow tragic death in the arms of the protagonist.
Ridley: Genetic experiment that goes wrong
Socks: logic which in a fortunate way directly impacts the planned events and kills this shitty story.

Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Trini on February 16, 2008, 05:29:28 PM
Make me the ass hole that betrays everyone, and then gets owned.  baddood;
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Post by: [REDACTED] on February 16, 2008, 05:32:31 PM
it needs conic sections apocalypse dramatic element, but anyway good job
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Post by: Title27GT on February 16, 2008, 05:34:12 PM
can I be the protagonist
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Post by: YPrrrr on February 16, 2008, 05:37:00 PM
I would like to be a character, yes. Preferably one that doesn't wear a red shirt.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Albel The Wicked on February 16, 2008, 05:39:27 PM
Make me your boyfriend. wub;

Not really, make me the guy that is the leader of the underground group.  Also i want magical powers.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Selkie on February 16, 2008, 06:08:57 PM
Alright so so far we got...

Tentatively

Me: Soldier who tried to prosper in the iron industry but failed and joined the army
Trini: Guy who betrays humans then who gets brutally killed
Title: protagonist of some sort idk who exactly yet
YPR: Guy who refuses to wear red shirts
Coluu: Crossdressing boyfriend of me

Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: KonohaShinobi on February 16, 2008, 06:11:15 PM
Kono wants a part of this epic trilogy.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: YPrrrr on February 16, 2008, 06:13:37 PM
Quote from: Selkie on February 16, 2008, 06:08:57 PM
Alright so so far we got...

Tentatively

Me: Soldier who tried to prosper in the iron industry but failed and joined the army
Trini: Guy who betrays humans then who gets brutally killed
Title: protagonist of some sort idk who exactly yet
YPR: Guy who refuses to wear red shirts
Coluu: Crossdressing boyfriend of me


The guy in the red shirt is always the first to go
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Selkie on February 16, 2008, 06:31:42 PM
Quote from: KonohaShinobi on February 16, 2008, 06:11:15 PM
Kono wants a part of this epic trilogy.


Who youu wanna be  baddood;
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: KonohaShinobi on February 16, 2008, 06:36:16 PM
Quote from: Selkie on February 16, 2008, 06:31:42 PM
Who youu wanna be  baddood;

I want to be one of the unknown extremely sophisticated beings, I shall be the right hand man to the leaser and will make first contact with the human miners. My personality will be serious, yet I will constantly make subtle little jokes or puns about the human race and it's shaky history. If I am killed I will be killed in some sort of a battle protecting the leader of our race.

Yeah, that's pretty cook.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Feynman on February 16, 2008, 06:39:25 PM
The geek who dies.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: [hedy]Zidone on February 16, 2008, 06:53:00 PM
King of the Castle in the Sky.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Albel The Wicked on February 16, 2008, 06:54:12 PM
Quote from: Selkie on February 16, 2008, 06:08:57 PM
Alright so so far we got...

Tentatively

Me: Soldier who tried to prosper in the iron industry but failed and joined the army
Trini: Guy who betrays humans then who gets brutally killed
Title: protagonist of some sort idk who exactly yet
YPR: Guy who refuses to wear red shirts
Coluu: Crossdressing boyfriend of me

Who is Coluu? madood;
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: FULL_METAL_RYDER2 on February 16, 2008, 07:53:51 PM
I want to be involved but I'm to lazy to actually read this on a regular basis.

oh hell, sign me up.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: The Speaker Of Words on February 16, 2008, 08:30:49 PM
I'll be the best friend of the protagonist.
I'll die a slow tragic death in the arms of the protagonist.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Socks on February 16, 2008, 09:40:25 PM
Make me logic which in a fortunate way directly impacts the planned events and kills this shitty story.
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Post by: Houdini on February 16, 2008, 10:27:17 PM
No. All your stories suck.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Ringo on February 16, 2008, 11:13:49 PM
Can I be the genetic experiment that goes horribly awry?
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Selkie on February 17, 2008, 03:09:15 PM
Guys change of plans. The story will now be just one long dream scene.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: YPrrrr on February 17, 2008, 03:12:30 PM
Quote from: Selkie on February 17, 2008, 03:09:15 PM
Guys change of plans. The story will now be just one long dream scene.
Sell out baddood;
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Post by: caponehollywood on February 17, 2008, 03:16:14 PM
It sucks unless I'm involved and don't die in less than 5 chapters.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: FULL_METAL_RYDER2 on February 17, 2008, 03:16:27 PM
CIRCLE JERK
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Post by: The Hand That Fisted Everyone on February 17, 2008, 03:42:01 PM
It could use more generic ideas
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Albel The Wicked on February 17, 2008, 03:44:13 PM
Why am i the boyfriend of a failure?  madood;
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: KonohaShinobi on February 17, 2008, 03:45:46 PM
Quote from: NotSid on February 17, 2008, 03:42:01 PM
It could use more generic ideas

Mine was stellar.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: FULL_METAL_RYDER2 on February 17, 2008, 03:47:42 PM
Quote from: Albel The Wicked on February 17, 2008, 03:44:13 PM
Why am i the boyfriend of a failure?  madood;
So you don't look as bad in comparison?
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Albel The Wicked on February 17, 2008, 04:01:06 PM
Quote from: Cameron the Smash Fag on February 17, 2008, 03:47:42 PM
So you don't look as be in comparison?
lolwut
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: FULL_METAL_RYDER2 on February 17, 2008, 04:05:16 PM
Quote from: Albel The Wicked on February 17, 2008, 04:01:06 PM
lolwut


Did i gave a fuck about Boyah?

how did I fuck up that bad?

Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: caponehollywood on February 17, 2008, 04:13:29 PM
Oh, can I be a human antagonast that starts on the humans side as a special ops sergeant and then betrays the humans.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Albel The Wicked on February 17, 2008, 04:16:55 PM
Quote from: Cameron the Smash Fag on February 17, 2008, 04:05:16 PM
Did i gave a fuck about Boyah?

how did I fuck up that bad?


"So you don't look as bad in comparison?"

WUT?!
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Post by: unwelc0med on February 17, 2008, 04:17:33 PM
you got bassir pretty well covered.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: FULL_METAL_RYDER2 on February 17, 2008, 04:17:56 PM
Quote from: Albel The Wicked on February 17, 2008, 04:16:55 PM
"So you don't look as bad in comparison?"

WUT?!
I don't see why you don't understand that. psyduck;
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Albel The Wicked on February 17, 2008, 04:19:03 PM
Quote from: Cameron the Smash Fag on February 17, 2008, 04:17:56 PM
I don't see why you don't understand that. psyduck;
Maybe because you are saying it...

"So you don't look as be in comparison?"
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Placebo Headwound on February 17, 2008, 04:22:44 PM
Can I be in the story?

I never get to be in the stories... ;_;
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Selkie on February 17, 2008, 06:20:18 PM
The story is now about Jesus entering the dream world of a psychopath and having to find a way to escape.

The psychopath in essence is Brooke Hogan.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Albel The Wicked on February 17, 2008, 06:25:49 PM
Quote from: Selkie on February 17, 2008, 06:20:18 PM
The story is now about Jesus entering the dream world of a psychopath and having to find a way to escape.

The psychopath in essence is Brooke Hogan.
When do we have sex?
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Selkie on February 17, 2008, 06:30:19 PM
Quote from: Albel The Wicked on February 17, 2008, 06:25:49 PM
When do we have sex?


When Brooke Hogan talks about the v-spot.
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Placebo Headwound on February 17, 2008, 06:31:02 PM
Quote from: Selkie on February 17, 2008, 06:20:18 PM
The story is now about Jesus entering the dream world of a psychopath and having to find a way to escape.

The psychopath in essence is Brooke Hogan.
Yes. baddood;
Title: Re: Hay guys is this a good story idea
Post by: Tomboh on February 17, 2008, 06:32:47 PM
make me someone who kills people
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Post by: Pele on February 17, 2008, 06:44:13 PM
Make me the guy that only says like one thing, but looks like an imposing, tough asshole the entire story