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I wrote a really disturbing story today.

Started by Lozal, April 19, 2007, 09:28:37 PM

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Lozal

I'm honestly ashamed that I wrote it. It talks about a boy whose mother died in childbirth and is beaten and abused by his father and grandparents. He then poisons the family and shoots himself.

I can't believe I wrote it...
powerofone; powerofone; powerofone; powerofone; powerofone;

Quote from: Pyrate on November 20, 2009, 05:11:08 AM

"You have an amazing body. You have amazing breasts."

Samus Aran

So? I've read and written worse myself. I don't really think it's "disturbing," but rather sad.

Daddy

The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.

Lozal

Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
I'm not going to go shoot anyone, though.
powerofone; powerofone; powerofone; powerofone; powerofone;

Quote from: Pyrate on November 20, 2009, 05:11:08 AM

"You have an amazing body. You have amazing breasts."

The artist formally known

Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;

Lozal

Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;
powerofone; powerofone; powerofone; powerofone; powerofone;

Quote from: Pyrate on November 20, 2009, 05:11:08 AM

"You have an amazing body. You have amazing breasts."

Daddy

Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;
Or is he?

ncba93ivyase


Quote from: ncba93ivyase on June 18, 2014, 07:58:34 PMthis isa great post i will use it in my sig

The artist formally known

Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;

Lozal

Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:37:14 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;
He killed himself. hgra;
powerofone; powerofone; powerofone; powerofone; powerofone;

Quote from: Pyrate on November 20, 2009, 05:11:08 AM

"You have an amazing body. You have amazing breasts."

fox127

Quote from: Pennywise on April 19, 2007, 09:39:11 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:38:13 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:37:14 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;
He killed himself. hgra;
Or maybe he only wanted to make us believe he killed himself so he could post on his BOYAH account.
That...makes....sense  burned;

cackslop

Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;

ZOMG I THOT HE SHAUT HEMSELV!!!1

Embrace Your Carnal Urges.

Silverhawk79

Quote from: fox127 on April 19, 2007, 09:41:14 PM
Quote from: Pennywise on April 19, 2007, 09:39:11 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:38:13 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:37:14 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;
He killed himself. hgra;
Or maybe he only wanted to make us believe he killed himself so he could post on his BOYAH account.
That...makes....sense  burned;
Time to ban Lozal for killing people.  cop;

Lozal

Quote from: silverhawk79 on April 20, 2007, 04:43:26 AM
Quote from: fox127 on April 19, 2007, 09:41:14 PM
Quote from: Pennywise on April 19, 2007, 09:39:11 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:38:13 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:37:14 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;
He killed himself. hgra;
Or maybe he only wanted to make us believe he killed himself so he could post on his BOYAH account.
That...makes....sense  burned;
Time to ban Lozal for killing people.  cop;
Don't ban me! I didn't kill anyone!

yes;
powerofone; powerofone; powerofone; powerofone; powerofone;

Quote from: Pyrate on November 20, 2009, 05:11:08 AM

"You have an amazing body. You have amazing breasts."

Daddy


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