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Title: HAY GUYS
Post by: Feynman on April 23, 2007, 05:38:11 PM
Read this portion of my Realistic Fiction story. caterpie;

QuoteAfter a while Jeffery somehow manages to get a Jewish boy name Andrew. Andrew was a defenseless weak boy just the same age as Jeffery. Jeffery delivers the first blow to the face of a defenseless ordinary boy with brown hair, Andrew. Andrew tries to get up, but with no luck he falls back to the floor. Jeffery kicks him in the face breaking his glasses. Ignoring the cries of the innocent person bleeding, he strikes another blow. After Andrew cries out in pain almost chanting something, Jeffery stays silent.
Title: Re: HAY GUYS
Post by: LCK on April 23, 2007, 05:39:17 PM
Ah, so you did change the name to Gerald. I told you it sounded more Jewish. flower;

Andrew would also be another possiblity. caterpie;
Title: Re: HAY GUYS
Post by: UnagiPower on April 23, 2007, 05:51:03 PM
Josh Weinstein
Title: Re: HAY GUYS
Post by: Feynman on April 23, 2007, 05:52:14 PM
Quote from: LCK on April 23, 2007, 05:39:17 PM
Andrew would also be another possiblity. caterpie;


MY GOD, YOU'RE RIGHT.

Quote from: UnagiPower on April 23, 2007, 05:51:03 PM
Josh Weinstein


What?