is anyone here good at writing poems?
if so, can you help me out and write me a serious poem about:
what it may be like to care for a persoon with alzheimers using careful word choice to describe emotions and diffuculties that arise...
i need it for my anthro project due tomorrow.
i write poerms for clucky
Quote from: Raekewn on March 09, 2009, 01:36:50 PM
i write poerms for clucky
I'M NOT ASKING YOU TO WRITE A GOD DAMN POEM FOR CLUCKY.
i'm so terrible at poetry it's unbelievable
Just take one of your posts and you have a poem.
Quote from: Geno on March 09, 2009, 01:39:12 PM
Just take one of your posts and you have a poem.
it's not about alzheimers.
plus it has to rhyme, or whatever poems do.
Quote from: lacette on March 09, 2009, 01:40:12 PM
plus it has to rhyme, or whatever poems do.
Wow, you really know nothing about poetry.
Have fun.
Quote from: Kaz on March 09, 2009, 01:41:08 PM
Wow, you really know nothing about poetry.
Have fun.
which is why i am asking someone to write me one.. :(
Just do what I do and steal song lyrics that nobody knows and turn that in
i have a disease
the name i have forgotten
oh god who are you
That haiku was ballin
Quote from: Geno on March 09, 2009, 01:42:28 PM
Just do what I do and steal song lyrics that nobody knows and turn that in
geno, who writes songs about alzheimers :(
Quote from: Raekewn on March 09, 2009, 01:44:10 PM
i have a disease
the name i have forgotten
oh god who are you
thank you.
except it has to be about caring for someone with alzheimers.
so something like idk.
I come and sit here by your cot
even though my name is long forgot
I tell you of your old high school
and the things your grandkids want to do
To some, this speech may take great thought
but it is easier once it is recited a lot
YPR that was sooooooooooo good!
did you just think about that right now?
I will gladly do so because my writing prowess is of course the highest out of any boyager bassir;
Quote from: KonohaShinobi on March 09, 2009, 02:02:06 PM
I will gladly do so because my writing prowess is of course the highest out of any boyager bassir;
giggle;
Quote from: lacette on March 09, 2009, 01:51:29 PM
YPR that was sooooooooooo good!
did you just think about that right now?
Yes, although I am no poet
Quote from: KonohaShinobi on March 09, 2009, 02:02:06 PM
I will gladly do so because my writing prowess is of course the highest out of any boyager bassir;
Doubt it.
Kono wrote those shitty poems about Dawn or something on NShit.
ypr could you be a dear and name that poem ?
Quote from: lacette on March 09, 2009, 02:10:11 PM
ypr could you be a dear and name that poem ?
I'd call it something like "Memory Jogging" or something like that...
The speaker is trying to literally jog the memory of their friend/relative, while jogging is something that gets easier the more you do it, just like the conversation the speaker often has with their friend.
thank you and good job :)
Do you remember me?
No
Okay
I hope you have a
Good
day
Uh Lacey, you always speak in poems
Quote from: Hiro! on March 09, 2009, 02:49:41 PM
Uh Lacey, you always speak in poems
no cause i never rhyme
POEMS DON'T HAVE TO RHYME GOD DAMNIT, IT'S NOT A DR SEUSS BOOK JESUS CHRIST
Quote from: Hiro! on March 09, 2009, 02:52:17 PM
POEMS DON'T HAVE TO RHYME GOD DAMNIT, IT'S NOT A DR SEUSS BOOK JESUS CHRIST
i'm sorry hiro saddood;
It's okay Lacey, i'm not mad, just sayin' is all happydood;
Quote from: Raekewn on March 09, 2009, 01:44:10 PM
i have a disease
the name i have forgotten
oh god who are you
god damnit (http://kevinmara.com/forums/index.php?topic=590.msg14886#msg14886) akudood;
Lacey, oh Lacey is her name!
She is the girl who makes my heart ache.
Without her, things just would not be the same.
Together, think of all we could make:
Babies, babies, and more babies, I exclaim!
My love for you is real; it is most certainly not fake.
And if I am rejected, my heart you would maim.
Let us proclaim our love so loud as to make the earth quake!
How was that? <3
Such a romantic.
That is too adorable
Quote from: KonohaShinobi on March 09, 2009, 03:13:36 PM
Such a romantic.
That is too adorable
Sometimes I'm so overcome with emotion that I just need to let it all out. saddood;
Hello johnny appleseed I say,
every morning, day after day
every evening, ever more gray
it is at night i begin to pray
his mind doesn't get anymore astray
Quote from: guff on March 09, 2009, 03:06:03 PM
god damnit (http://kevinmara.com/forums/index.php?topic=590.msg14886#msg14886) akudood;
haha oh guff, you're so cute.
Quote from: Slim on March 09, 2009, 03:10:01 PM
Lacey, oh Lacey is her name!
She is the girl who makes my heart ache.
Without her, things just would not be the same.
Together, think of all we could make:
Babies, babies, and more babies, I exclaim!
My love for you is real; it is most certainly not fake.
And if I am rejected, my heart you would maim.
Let us proclaim our love so loud as to make the earth quake!
How was that? <3
that was beautiful.
although it has nothing to do with dementia.
it was still lovely <3
Quote from: Hiro! on March 09, 2009, 02:52:17 PM
POEMS DON'T HAVE TO RHYME GOD DAMNIT, IT'S NOT A DR SEUSS BOOK JESUS CHRIST
poems
that don't rhyme
are hardly
poems at all
PS:
fuck robert frost
Quote from: lacette on March 09, 2009, 03:17:19 PMthat was beautiful.
although it has nothing to do with dementia.
it was still lovely <3
As long as I have your approval, I am content. <3
Quote from: j o e i n c on March 09, 2009, 03:17:55 PMfuck robert frost
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.
giggle;
speling is a cage
that restitcs the mind
from thott, and freedum
its in a bind
John jacob jingle-heimer shmidt / his name is my name too / whenever i go out / the people always shout / "there goes john jacob jingle-heimer shmidt!"
i love that song
i write poetry.
But I wouldn't write a poem for someone else to use as their own, even if it was someone I liked. It's just not right.
roses are blue
violets are red
i made doody in my pants
and your parents are dead
there is no way that could be a good poem, tell your teacher to die
Quote from: wziard on March 09, 2009, 06:48:34 PM
there is no way that could be a good poem, tell your teacher to die
Yeah, it's not exactly material that etches itself out well.
Quote from: wziard on March 09, 2009, 06:48:34 PM
there is no way that could be a good poem, tell your teacher to die
akudood;
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Alzheimers is intensssse
Now who are you?
I'm sorry, but I had to. :(
Quote from: Selkie on March 09, 2009, 02:40:38 PM
Do you remember me?
No
Okay
I hope you have a
Good
day
I laughed so much.
Oh god
Quote from: Selkie on March 09, 2009, 02:40:38 PM
Do you remember me?
No
Okay
I hope you have a
Good
day
This sounds more like something that happens after a really drunk one night stand
Quote from: YPR on March 09, 2009, 08:41:27 PM
This sounds more like something that happens after a really drunk one night stand
or when that really nerdy, stinky kid that's had a crush on you since 3rd grade see's you in 10th grade PE
brown kids always gotta stink bad
Quote from: Happy Price on March 09, 2009, 08:54:30 PM
or when that really nerdy, stinky kid that's had a crush on you since 3rd grade see's you in 10th grade PE
Yeah, that too...
I've never had a stinky person love me saddood;
Quote from: YPR on March 09, 2009, 08:56:48 PM
Yeah, that too...
I've never had a stinky person love me saddood;
I can love you giggle;
Oh wait
I showered today