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Title: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 04:46:32 PM
(http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9546/metroidwiprm7.png)

I need to know what to change. It feels like something is missing, but I don't know what. gonk;
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: SBKT on May 25, 2007, 04:49:37 PM
Words. Add that and it'll look much better. I only ever judge from a finished picture.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 04:51:02 PM
Quote from: SBKT on May 25, 2007, 04:49:37 PM
Words. Add that and it'll look much better. I only ever judge from a finished picture.
Duh. psyduck;
I mean imagewise, what can I add?
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: SBKT on May 25, 2007, 04:52:12 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 04:51:02 PM
Quote from: SBKT on May 25, 2007, 04:49:37 PM
Words. Add that and it'll look much better. I only ever judge from a finished picture.
Duh. psyduck;
I mean imagewise, what can I add?
Well....

Some almost completely transparent metroids to the side or something?
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: anus on May 25, 2007, 04:52:52 PM
it needs cock mongler.

I actually like it the way it is. Keep it.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 04:53:18 PM
Quote from: SBKT on May 25, 2007, 04:52:12 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 04:51:02 PM
Quote from: SBKT on May 25, 2007, 04:49:37 PM
Words. Add that and it'll look much better. I only ever judge from a finished picture.
Duh. psyduck;
I mean imagewise, what can I add?
Well....

Some almost completely transparent metroids to the side or something?
zomg
Great idea, I can make it look like a whole bunch of Metroids all in a group. =O
Thanks. flower;
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: heltar on May 25, 2007, 04:54:48 PM
I like it, thank you
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: SBKT on May 25, 2007, 04:56:56 PM
Quote from: Bassir on May 25, 2007, 04:55:22 PM
NIGGAS
Black People aren't Metroids. Brothers in law are Metroids.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Feynman on May 25, 2007, 04:59:48 PM
WHO THE FUCK DELETED MY AWESOME SUGGESTION?

Well, I suggest having a border. I would've suggested more metroids, but that's been suggested already.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: ncba93ivyase on May 25, 2007, 05:12:24 PM
Quote from: Bassir on May 25, 2007, 04:59:48 PM
WHO THE FUCK DELETED MY AWESOME SUGGESTION?

Well, I suggest having a border. I would've suggested more metroids, but that's been suggested already.
A futuristic/metallic border would probably look good.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 05:29:15 PM
Great suggestions, I'll try them out and see how it looks.
THEN WE DO IT AGAIN. awesome;
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:30:33 PM
Teach me to make awesome sigs Silverhawk.  awesome;
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: ncba93ivyase on May 25, 2007, 05:30:58 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:30:33 PM
Teach me to make awesome sigs Silverhawk.  awesome;
SKILLET'S BETTER.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:32:02 PM
Quote from: Lawlz on May 25, 2007, 05:30:58 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:30:33 PM
Teach me to make awesome sigs Silverhawk.  awesome;
SKILLET'S BETTER.


I don't like his style. Silverhawk makes abstract sigs which I want to learn how to do.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Feynman on May 25, 2007, 05:33:18 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:32:02 PM
Quote from: Lawlz on May 25, 2007, 05:30:58 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:30:33 PM
Teach me to make awesome sigs Silverhawk.  awesome;
SKILLET'S BETTER.


I don't like his style. Silverhawk makes abstract sigs which I want to learn how to do.


FUCKIN' TRY AGAIN. (http://forum.boyah.net/index.php?topic=2987.msg37309#msg37309)
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: ncba93ivyase on May 25, 2007, 05:36:01 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:32:02 PM
Quote from: Lawlz on May 25, 2007, 05:30:58 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:30:33 PM
Teach me to make awesome sigs Silverhawk.  awesome;
SKILLET'S BETTER.


I don't like his style. Silverhawk makes abstract sigs which I want to learn how to do.
Silverhawk uses the same style for everything he makes. Skillet kind of does the same, but he seems to vary his style every few weeks and his work is actually more abstract. I CHANGE MY STYLE WITH EVERYTHING I MAKE.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 05:44:56 PM
Quote from: Lawlz on May 25, 2007, 05:36:01 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:32:02 PM
Quote from: Lawlz on May 25, 2007, 05:30:58 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:30:33 PM
Teach me to make awesome sigs Silverhawk.  awesome;
SKILLET'S BETTER.


I don't like his style. Silverhawk makes abstract sigs which I want to learn how to do.
Silverhawk uses the same style for everything he makes. Skillet kind of does the same, but he seems to vary his style every few weeks and his work is actually more abstract. I CHANGE MY STYLE WITH EVERYTHING I MAKE.
I'm trying to change my style. jsr;
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 05:45:46 PM
I hate the border, but...

(http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/7614/metroidwip2th9.png)
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: ncba93ivyase on May 25, 2007, 05:47:47 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 05:45:46 PM
I hate the border, but...

(http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/7614/metroidwip2th9.png)
NONONONONONO

For a Metallic border, just make a new layer. Fill it with gray. Motionblur at a level you think looks good (5-15). Then use the polygonal lasso tool, make a some odd blockish design, and when you're done, delete the innerds.

It'll give you  kind of an OS X window design.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:53:11 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 05:45:46 PM
I hate the border, but...

(http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/7614/metroidwip2th9.png)


How the fuck did you do that? O_O
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: ncba93ivyase on May 25, 2007, 05:54:07 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 05:53:11 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 05:45:46 PM
I hate the border, but...

(http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/7614/metroidwip2th9.png)


How the fuck did you do that? O_O
Shoop.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:06:56 PM
(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip3.png)

(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip4.png)

Which is better?
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: The Oggmonster on May 25, 2007, 08:08:10 PM
Samus?
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:11:38 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:06:56 PM
(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip3.png)

(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip4.png)

Which is better?


Would you recommend any good tuts O_o?
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:21:25 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:11:38 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:06:56 PM
(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip3.png)

(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip4.png)

Which is better?


Would you recommend any good tuts O_o?
Nope. I just have experience. I taught myself. flower;
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:22:07 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:21:25 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:11:38 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:06:56 PM
(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip3.png)

(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip4.png)

Which is better?


Would you recommend any good tuts O_o?
Nope. I just have experience. I taught myself. flower;

Teach me?  flower;
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:22:58 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:22:07 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:21:25 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:11:38 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:06:56 PM
(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip3.png)

(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip4.png)

Which is better?


Would you recommend any good tuts O_o?
Nope. I just have experience. I taught myself. flower;

Teach me?  flower;
I suck at teaching. gonk;
Plus I don't really have any major tricks...except for one that I just remembered. awesome;
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:28:15 PM
Is the one I'm using right now good?  psyduck;
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:31:41 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:28:15 PM
Is the one I'm using right now good?  psyduck;
It's...alright, but boring.
It's all one color, and it doesn't flow. Text isn't aliased, and it's choppy.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:35:00 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:31:41 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:28:15 PM
Is the one I'm using right now good?  psyduck;
It's...alright, but boring.
It's all one color, and it doesn't flow. Text isn't aliased, and it's choppy.


If I give you .psd, can you fix it?
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:36:31 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:35:00 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:31:41 PM
Quote from: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:28:15 PM
Is the one I'm using right now good?  psyduck;
It's...alright, but boring.
It's all one color, and it doesn't flow. Text isn't aliased, and it's choppy.


If I give you .psd, can you fix it?
Perhaps.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: iWolf on May 25, 2007, 08:37:40 PM
Ok, I'll send it to you on Nsider tomorrow.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: SBKT on May 25, 2007, 08:49:30 PM
Where is it? My computer crashes on page 2 for some idiot reason.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: ncba93ivyase on May 25, 2007, 08:51:39 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:06:56 PM
(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip3.png)

(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip4.png)

Which is better?
The one in the OP.

Putting a bunch of (the same) Metroids at the same angle and everything looks stupid and boring. Get pictures of Hunter Metroids and stuff like that for more variety, and have some slanted.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:53:17 PM
Quote from: SBKT on May 25, 2007, 08:49:30 PM
Where is it? My computer crashes on page 2 for some idiot reason.
It should be on page 2 or 3...
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:54:27 PM
Quote from: Lawlz on May 25, 2007, 08:51:39 PM
Quote from: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 08:06:56 PM
(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip3.png)

(http://www.photobucket.com/albums/v338/silverhawk79/sigs/metroidwip4.png)

Which is better?
The one in the OP.

Putting a bunch of (the same) Metroids at the same angle and everything looks stupid and boring. Get pictures of Hunter Metroids and stuff like that for more variety, and have some slanted.
Alright, I'll work on it.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: ncba93ivyase on May 25, 2007, 08:56:04 PM
(http://content.answers.com/main/content/wp/en/thumb/5/5c/180px-Metroid_1.jpg)

There's a picture you can use. Just turn it clockwise a few degrees.
Title: Re: I need some quick feedback. (DON'T MOVE, I'LL DELETE WHEN I'M DONE)
Post by: Silverhawk79 on May 25, 2007, 09:00:03 PM
Quote from: Lawlz on May 25, 2007, 08:56:04 PM
(http://content.answers.com/main/content/wp/en/thumb/5/5c/180px-Metroid_1.jpg)

There's a picture you can use. Just turn it clockwise a few degrees.
Thanks. *shop da wop*