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Title: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:28:37 PM
I'm honestly ashamed that I wrote it. It talks about a boy whose mother died in childbirth and is beaten and abused by his father and grandparents. He then poisons the family and shoots himself.

I can't believe I wrote it...
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Samus Aran on April 19, 2007, 09:29:51 PM
So? I've read and written worse myself. I don't really think it's "disturbing," but rather sad.
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Daddy on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:31:03 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
I'm not going to go shoot anyone, though.
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: The artist formally known on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Daddy on April 19, 2007, 09:36:38 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;
Or is he?
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: ncba93ivyase on April 19, 2007, 09:37:10 PM
You sick bastard. spam;
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: The artist formally known on April 19, 2007, 09:37:14 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:38:13 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:37:14 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;
He killed himself. hgra;
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: fox127 on April 19, 2007, 09:41:14 PM
Quote from: Pennywise on April 19, 2007, 09:39:11 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:38:13 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:37:14 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;
He killed himself. hgra;
Or maybe he only wanted to make us believe he killed himself so he could post on his BOYAH account.
That...makes....sense  burned;
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: cackslop on April 20, 2007, 01:04:24 AM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;

ZOMG I THOT HE SHAUT HEMSELV!!!1
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Silverhawk79 on April 20, 2007, 04:43:26 AM
Quote from: fox127 on April 19, 2007, 09:41:14 PM
Quote from: Pennywise on April 19, 2007, 09:39:11 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:38:13 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:37:14 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;
He killed himself. hgra;
Or maybe he only wanted to make us believe he killed himself so he could post on his BOYAH account.
That...makes....sense  burned;
Time to ban Lozal for killing people.  cop;
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Lozal on April 20, 2007, 10:02:03 AM
Quote from: silverhawk79 on April 20, 2007, 04:43:26 AM
Quote from: fox127 on April 19, 2007, 09:41:14 PM
Quote from: Pennywise on April 19, 2007, 09:39:11 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:38:13 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:37:14 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;
He killed himself. hgra;
Or maybe he only wanted to make us believe he killed himself so he could post on his BOYAH account.
That...makes....sense  burned;
Time to ban Lozal for killing people.  cop;
Don't ban me! I didn't kill anyone!

yes;
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Daddy on April 20, 2007, 10:02:38 AM
Yet...  gonk;
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Lozal on April 20, 2007, 10:03:43 AM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 20, 2007, 10:02:38 AM
Yet...  gonk;
You seriously think I'm going to kill someone?
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: superclucky on April 20, 2007, 01:24:16 PM
You should become a writer for kid books.
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Silverhawk79 on April 20, 2007, 01:25:07 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 20, 2007, 10:02:03 AM
Quote from: silverhawk79 on April 20, 2007, 04:43:26 AM
Quote from: fox127 on April 19, 2007, 09:41:14 PM
Quote from: Pennywise on April 19, 2007, 09:39:11 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:38:13 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:37:14 PM
Quote from: Lozal on April 19, 2007, 09:35:04 PM
Quote from: xfollowthereaperx on April 19, 2007, 09:31:06 PM
Quote from: JMV290 on April 19, 2007, 09:30:23 PM
The VT shooter also wrote disturbing stories.
OH SHIT LOZAL IS THE V TECH SHOOTER


EXTREME PLOT TWIST  burned;
But, he's dead. I'm still here.  educate;


WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HIM YOU SICK FREAK  argh;


GIVE US BACK THE SHOOTER hgra;
He killed himself. hgra;
Or maybe he only wanted to make us believe he killed himself so he could post on his BOYAH account.
That...makes....sense  burned;
Time to ban Lozal for killing people.  cop;
Don't ban me! I didn't kill anyone!

yes;
...Yet.  argh;
Title: Re: I wrote a really disturbing story today.
Post by: Feynman on April 20, 2007, 01:45:54 PM
I had an essay due on Pearl Harbor and all I wrote about was how the Japanese had the right to kick our asses. caterpie;