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Title: i wrote a fanfic on aladin
Post by: Daddy on June 16, 2008, 07:21:36 PM
~aladains stay in jail~

one day aladan was going through on his magic karptet when jafar was like naaaa jasimine is mine and aladain wasnt having that so he wished on his genie for a sword to duel jafar with and then they dualed and dueld until the night was ovr and no one had yet won so they packed up their bags and decided to brawl it out and they did.

aladain had a broken jaw but jafar had been placed into a coma so the sultan had aladain sent to prison for long time for being guilty of a crime.  while in jail aladain made a new friend named amirad and they would do every thing together and they werent lonely in prison :)

one day aladain and amirad were eating lunch when some bad man came and started hurting amiarads butt xD aladain was like stop stop stop but the man idd not listen so aladain hit him with a lunch tray and then some one jumped in and there was a whole riot.

aladain and hte bad man were place in solitary confinement for a week and they were told to behave.  amirad kept crying that it hurt and eventually died of syphilis.


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Title: Re: i wrote a fanfic on aladin
Post by: musica.cards on June 16, 2008, 07:34:45 PM
Sounds like a weird dream baddood;
Title: Re: i wrote a fanfic on aladin
Post by: Hiro on June 16, 2008, 07:37:40 PM
I love you
Title: Re: i wrote a fanfic on aladin
Post by: Selkie on June 16, 2008, 07:52:30 PM
a little more detail and character development of Amirad would make this a beautiful and touching story, and more accessible ^_^
Title: Re: i wrote a fanfic on aladin
Post by: KonohaShinobi on June 16, 2008, 07:55:03 PM
sounds like a wet dream baddood;
Title: Re: i wrote a fanfic on aladin
Post by: Kalahari Inkantation on June 16, 2008, 09:13:21 PM
Sounds like something Joeinc would write. befuddlement
Title: Re: i wrote a fanfic on aladin
Post by: Socks on June 16, 2008, 09:16:11 PM
Joeinc's would be massively more entertaining.
Title: Re: i wrote a fanfic on aladin
Post by: Geno on June 16, 2008, 09:17:25 PM
o and the little mermaid came in and saved alladin
Title: Re: i wrote a fanfic on aladin
Post by: Sam on June 16, 2008, 09:19:28 PM
It's only a matter of time before Aladdin runs into Bassir.