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Poll
Question: Do you approve?
Option 1: Slightly votes: 2
Option 2: No votes: 1
Option 3: Shit votes: 1
Option 4: HAY ALRITE votes: 1
Option 5: U GO GIRL. :( votes: 2
Title: Hay, so I made this song. [Downtempo]
Post by: me003 on December 14, 2007, 12:15:14 AM
So yea, I made this.
Spent some serious time on it.
I approve. How about you.
Oh yea, you can vote on it, which will help me. I'm only allowing you to vote 3-5's though. 1 and 2 are broke.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/111232
Title: Re: Hay, so I made this song. [Downtempo]
Post by: Samus Aran on December 14, 2007, 12:22:34 AM
Umm...not bad, but it's too long and quite repetetive, not to mention there's not really much happening in terms of dynamics or something to actually keep our attention. Maybe sampling some more ambient material would help...it's really lacking. Certainly has potential...it's just not done.
Title: Re: Hay, so I made this song. [Downtempo]
Post by: me003 on December 14, 2007, 12:37:08 AM
Quote from: Speedykaz on December 14, 2007, 12:22:34 AM
Umm...not bad, but it's too long and quite repetetive, not to mention there's not really much happening in terms of dynamics or something to actually keep our attention. Maybe sampling some more ambient material would help...it's really lacking. Certainly has potential...it's just not done.
Thanks for not making a dick post. Yea, I just keep trying to layer on something new, and it never works. Maybe a groovy bassline. Well, I'm not going to work on it for a while. I'm starting something new.
Title: Re: Hay, so I made this song. [Downtempo]
Post by: strongbad on December 14, 2007, 06:16:09 AM
I remember you posting this before..
It's fun, but pretty much everything lawlz said.
What did you use to make it
Title: Re: Hay, so I made this song. [Downtempo]
Post by: Snorkel on December 14, 2007, 03:35:09 PM
Reminds me of this one time when I took a shit.

Really, though, it wasn't bad. A bit boring, far too artificial sounding (painfully so, even), not enough going on.
Title: Re: Hay, so I made this song. [Downtempo]
Post by: me003 on December 14, 2007, 05:31:11 PM
Quote from: Strongbad007 on December 14, 2007, 06:16:09 AM
I remember you posting this before..
It's fun, but pretty much everything lawlz said.
What did you use to make it
No,  that had to be a different song. I just put this song up.
Title: Re: Hay, so I made this song. [Downtempo]
Post by: strongbad on December 14, 2007, 06:14:49 PM
Quote from: MetheE on December 14, 2007, 05:31:11 PM
No,  that had to be a different song. I just put this song up.

You sure? Oh... Well, it sounded familar to something..
Title: Re: Hay, so I made this song. [Downtempo]
Post by: UnagiPower on December 16, 2007, 07:39:49 AM
Quote from: Strongbad007 on December 14, 2007, 06:16:09 AM
I remember you posting this before..
It's fun, but pretty much everything lawlz said.
What did you use to make it


lol, Lawlz = Kaz.