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A rap. Tell me what you think.

Started by hotlikesauce., April 15, 2009, 06:42:52 PM

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russell

do you understand what rap is

it is not writing 100 phrases that start with "I" or "you" or "when" and making them end with rhyming words

this is an example of rap

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I was a dark, dumb student
No hooky rookie day trippin' on visions of chickens that look like R. Crumb drew 'em
They grew 'em in a royal dirt of Suffolk county's flooring with the blood of an alcoholic clergyman in his forearms
Long Island was porn stars and puppies pushin' sniffles
Fit into the aforementioned or slipped through the pinholes
'Zook slipped through the pinholes
Crispy the godsender who thunk over a quarter plunk to local Mortal Kom vender
Both the formal squad censor
Look down
Either side across the marsh before it was "Awesome cars!"
My calling card Calvary cooking an '85 Dodge Ares
Gas for Huntington and back, barely
Equipped with Super-Soakers full of piss and an uncanny knack for constantly upsetting pigs by doing stupid shit
The kid ... his ring king dummies to King Kullen, where he hollered "Fuck the world" from a parking lot in the suburbs


to give but one.




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me003

April 20, 2009, 03:27:04 AM #17 Last Edit: April 20, 2009, 03:31:18 AM by Methree
Quote from: wziard on April 16, 2009, 04:54:41 PM
do you understand what rap is

it is not writing 100 phrases that start with "I" or "you" or "when" and making them end with rhyming words

this is an example of rap


to give but one.




what is aesop for 50 alex      and i talked to aesop just yesterday lol at a in-store but it was really awkward when i had nothing else to say so i walked away.
Quote from: reefer on November 29, 2007, 11:32:08 PM
No offense to her but she kinda doesn't know crap about shit


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