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Started by strongbad, September 27, 2008, 01:09:28 PM

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Det in F♯ Major

September 27, 2008, 06:24:47 PM #15
idk. calm and content. and also excited about starting rehearsals.  powerofone;

Quote from: Clucky on September 27, 2008, 01:49:44 PM
Somewhere around 3 I felt suicidal and depressed.


that's because i left around three, baby.  cjlubdoods;
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Samus Aran

September 27, 2008, 08:03:03 PM #16
she's in love with me and i feel fine  doodella;

but seriously i feel just fine

not overly happy or depressed or anything

Classic

September 27, 2008, 08:07:19 PM #17
You know, I'm kind of everything.

Very anxious and excited, but very bored and sad.

YPrrrr

September 27, 2008, 08:08:50 PM #18
I feel sick

shit sucks

CutLess

September 27, 2008, 09:42:59 PM #19
I'm worried that I have too much work and that the fact that I haven't started any of it will screw me over tomorrow.

I'm strangely happy that I didn't go to my school's homecoming dance, but sad that I missed the hypnotist show the day before.

I didn't really want to go home for the weekend (at least, not all of it), but I'm relieved everything worked out in the end.

Hensa

September 27, 2008, 11:52:31 PM #20
randy baby, yeah  caterpie;

Geno

September 28, 2008, 01:31:08 AM #21
tyerd
Quote from: ncba93ivyase on April 04, 2014, 10:31:27 PM
geno i swear to fucking god silvertone and i are going to board you up in your house and have the world's greatest goddamn boyager meetup right next door and put burning bags of dog shit in front of all of your windows and doors and your house will smell like dog shit but you won't be able to extinguish the flames and you'll choke and die on dog shit fumes. what made you will also kill you.

i am throwing down 5 god DAMN dollars geno i will go out and collect the dog shit myself this is fucking happening jesus fucking christ

i'll give you an upperdecker with dog shit and don't you fucking doubt it for one little second you fat bastard

superclucky

September 28, 2008, 04:18:23 AM #22
I feel like murdering my dad for having the fucking TV on.
kewns are smelly

Selkie

September 28, 2008, 05:50:41 AM #23
A poem to express my mindset....

Light explodes like stars
Upon the canvas of night
Sound rings out of a din
like a hand from a crowd
The mind finds a place
The head cannot
A shimmering face
Not soon forgot
The one thing that's better
than these moments I see
Is when these dreams
Find reality


I need to work on my structure lol


Daddy

September 28, 2008, 06:45:31 AM #24
third day and it's worse doodthing;

superclucky

September 28, 2008, 07:19:18 AM #25
I feel happy and guilty.

kewns are smelly

Sam

September 28, 2008, 08:20:52 AM #26
I'm really stressed with school, SAT's and trying to get into college
1.8mb is too huge for a sig nigga

Lotos

September 28, 2008, 10:23:12 AM #27
Depressed, tired.

Samus Aran

September 28, 2008, 10:27:58 AM #28
Quote from: Selkie224 on September 28, 2008, 05:50:41 AM
Light explodes like stars
Upon the canvas of night
Sound rings out of a din
like a hand from a crowd
The mind finds a place
The head cannot
A shimmering face
Not soon forgot
The one thing that's better
than these moments I see
Is when these dreams
Find reality


It looks almost done to me, although if I were you I'd be more careful about capital letters considering you've messed up the flow of some of your lines by making them look like new sentences. It's not a rule to not capitalize lines that aren't new sentences/ideas, but it's a pretty good guideline to follow.

And of course breaking it into stanzas would be helpful.
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