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I wrote a short story

Started by Selkie, April 09, 2008, 06:40:48 PM

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sans culottes

April 10, 2008, 03:39:15 PM #15
The two cities should be Dallas and Fort Worth, imo
I support BUSH

Samus Aran

April 10, 2008, 03:40:43 PM #16
Quote from: Co-Z on April 10, 2008, 03:39:15 PM
The two cities should be Dallas and Fort Worth, imo


Making them real cities would pretty much ruin the story, because the concept is hypothetical.

sans culottes

April 10, 2008, 03:50:39 PM #17
Quote from: Kazarus on April 10, 2008, 03:40:43 PM
Making them real cities would pretty much ruin the story, because the concept is hypothetical.

ino.

just thought it'd be good plot to use by someone from fort worth who hates dallas and its damn modern life.
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Socks

April 10, 2008, 04:16:36 PM #18
Quote from: Kazarus on April 10, 2008, 01:07:18 PM
No, but you are the only one who takes friendly appraisal with a side of criticism as "a hard on."


It was either a hard on or an orgasm, I felt the latter was a bitch much, hence my choice of words.

Hi Kaz.

NinjaBlank

April 21, 2008, 09:14:51 PM #19
It's a good intro that kinda lures the reader into it.

Keep up the good  work ;D
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